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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-07-03 10:13 AM



I Often wonder
N ot sure just why
C alloused words
R emove so much trust
E ven when it seems
D ubious you mean to
U surp the comfort I so
L ong to keep in mind
O ften at the expense of
U sing denial instead of
S imply accepting truths

H ave you
E ver really felt those things
A nd embraced the
R eality of doubt coursing
T hrough your mind?

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-07-03 10:17 AM


Had to read this twice, and am still wondering who used the calloused words...

and who stripped whom of comfort...

so I will go back, and read, again....

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 07-03-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-07-03 10:20 AM


Well said, Ron.  I think I understand and have asked the same questions.
MyEnchanted_Melody
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3 posted 2001-07-03 11:11 AM




To answer your question, I'd say Yes....I have...

But you have put it so well.....

Thank you
*************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Rex Allen McCoy
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4 posted 2001-07-03 11:41 AM


Interesting form of acrostic
I like the way it runs on
Also an interesting thought to ponder
Nicely done

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5 posted 2001-07-03 12:11 PM


Amazing!  
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with you
6 posted 2001-07-03 12:33 PM


yes, I have....once upon a time........this is great  
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