Open Poetry #14 |
Incredulous Heart |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I Often wonder N ot sure just why C alloused words R emove so much trust E ven when it seems D ubious you mean to U surp the comfort I so L ong to keep in mind O ften at the expense of U sing denial instead of S imply accepting truths H ave you E ver really felt those things A nd embraced the R eality of doubt coursing T hrough your mind? |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Had to read this twice, and am still wondering who used the calloused words... and who stripped whom of comfort... so I will go back, and read, again.... [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 07-03-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well said, Ron. I think I understand and have asked the same questions. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
To answer your question, I'd say Yes....I have... But you have put it so well..... Thank you ************************* It's only me.......only me |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Interesting form of acrostic I like the way it runs on Also an interesting thought to ponder Nicely done |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Amazing! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, I have....once upon a time........this is great |
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