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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-07-02 10:58 PM

When I Close My Eyes
By: Noah Eaton
7/1/01

When I close my eyes
I begin to dream
Where I am pleasantly surprised
To fall for a girl so sweet

A goddess as sweet as can be
Singing happily in the forests
Enticing me into her fantasies
Holding true loves essence

I reach out to hold her hands
She muffles me gently in her embrace
A heart having trodden endless deserts sands
Now finds paradise, staring into her face

Holding her close, warming her happy heart
Her love transcending the seventh heaven
Making love to her from night to morning
Satin pleasures revealing, lost in her romantic haven

Melting under her breath, a mouth left breathless
Her tongue touching mine, hearts aflame in passion
Kissing her bare flesh, speaking poetry between each kiss
My girls heart to mine, all our dreams blossoming in fashion

When I close my eyes
I dream of a love so special
Praying for the day I won’t cry
When I have true love, forever to hold close

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2001-07-02 11:49 PM

I'd say "keep dreaming" if it didn't have a negative connotation, so instead I'll say: "A wonderful dream you've presented here and I am grateful for having shared it with you, for a momnet." Pleasantly ethereal and evocative... may it turn real for you.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-03 09:03 AM

Noah.. such a dream to strive for... hang in there bud..you may just find it.

I enjoyed this...quite a lot..

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-07-03 03:28 PM

Open your eyes, don't spend your life dreaming of the perfect one. Go out and find her.
Enjoyed your poem.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2001-07-10 11:01 PM

Noah,

Dreams can be so lovely can't they? I hope this dream will come true for you someday... which I'm sure it will. I liked this alot

TaraB

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

5 posted 2001-07-10 11:35 PM

Dreams can come true....Thanks for sharing this momment with us
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-07-11 06:36 AM

Beautiful writing Noah and these things can happen!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2001-07-11 10:47 AM

enjoy

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