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Open Poetry #14

The Strongest Power

Lisann
Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

0 posted 2001-07-02 10:57 PM

The summers morning grass
Is sparkling wet with dew
The sun peers over the horizon--
The tender earth is still cool.
The sun's rays gain strength
And warm the world from end to end
A warmth that touches both of us
As you become my friend.
The rays grow warmer rapidly
Each flower looks to the sun,
Our friendship will grow stronger
As our souls become one.
The sun dries the delicate dew
And opens every flower,
And you my friend have dried my tears
With love the strongest power.

I know this one is a little weak but I wrote it when I was 10 years old. That was 20 years ago.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

1 posted 2001-07-03 01:41 AM

Just ten? Heck, I couldn't write that well when I was in my twenties. Amazing!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2001-07-04 05:27 AM

Lisann-
   wow...when you were 10?!  that's amazing!
   i'm liking it...

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-07-04 05:40 AM

This is nice...James

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