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Breathing Lessons
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Breathing Lessons |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Breathing lessons wounds wound past me, a few deep, a number unseen several obscene as winding wind wrapped then warped my thoughts moonlight pulls but sunlight heals so i shall walk a little farther to greet the shore in daylight, and allow it to swallow me whole at night remembering to breathe |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I see several words that are different... and the possible is great... so now..I'll say what I want..( sticking out tongue) GOOD STUFF!!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent work, Decaflame. Your true talent shines in this one!  All writing comes |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
so i shall walk a little farther to greet the shore in daylight, and allow it to swallow me whole at night remembering to breathe the healing process begins, I really enjoyed this one. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I heal best at night. Very well done, Deca. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now you KNOW I loved this! And yes, just remember to breathe, and all will be well! If I have made you smile today, then I have done my job! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
gr8 write indeed. Somber, but good  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Decaflame--I love the way you said this hope ...some things just get better if we remember to walk into the sun and breathe. |
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