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Open Poetry #14

This time you are wrong

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

0 posted 2001-07-02 03:09 PM

you give me my glow
your rays enlighten me so
you give me romance

they love under me
they write songs of my moonbeams
only reflections

sol is all knowing
usually, not this time
this time you are wrong

Let thy moon arise. William Blake

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-07-02 03:14 PM

Ah, your moonbeams reach where Sun does not...an excellent write, sir....an excellent write....

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-02 03:34 PM

like this...it left me with just a hint of question..a little mystery... good write here!!!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-07-02 03:59 PM

Very intriguing, lunatic. Great write!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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