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Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

0 posted 2001-07-02 02:29 PM

I Kiss Her Eyes

by Michael

A friend,
I place my hand
upon her cheek
and kiss
her eyes.

Yes, we’re close.
She knows me well.

A tender embrace,
a longing glance,
escaping sighs,
but still,
a friend
and still,
I kiss her eyes.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-07-02 02:30 PM

What a light, delicate touch....and what a warm feeling to pass, among friends....

this is beautiful....and then some....

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-02 02:31 PM

ah..love what is unsaid in this..and the emote... good work here... good indeed..

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-07-02 02:37 PM

Tender and gently sweet, Michael. That would make you one of my BEST friends---smiles.
and yes, you ARE a poet!!!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2001-07-02 03:28 PM

Michael--To kiss a friend is delicate and sweet and most sincere. This was lovely!

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-07-02 04:09 PM

Very sweet and sensual write, Michael. Friends are the best.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

6 posted 2001-07-02 04:31 PM

and still,
I kiss her eyes.

==============

Auguste.....
I loved the simple softness and delicate feeling of this.......

Thank you dearly
*******************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-07-02 06:39 PM

well done my friend. . .

there's always the wonder of a friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-07-02 07:09 PM

again, you made me cry!

it's ok though.....just brings my friend to mind and the missing him a bit stronger.....loved this

truly sweet and I know the feelings that go with

I'm keeping this ok?

magnolia
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since 2001-05-05

Posts 16

9 posted 2001-07-02 08:21 PM

Very nice.. must be some good friend!

Magnolia

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

10 posted 2001-07-02 10:47 PM

This is beautiful, Micheal. Sweetness for sure!

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

11 posted 2001-07-03 03:00 PM

Lady In White,
Isn't friendship between a man and woman supposed to have a delicate touch?  Yes, always...thank you.

Cpat Hair,
Often in friendship some things must remain unsaid, don't you think?  Thank you.

serenity,
Yes, this is reserved for the "best" of friends.  Thank you, serenity, both for reading and for letting me know that you believe I am a poet.

Martie,
Yes, alway.  Thank you, my friend.

Lone Wolf,
I very much appreciate you reading and thank you for the kind words.

MyEnchanted_Melody,
Yes, "and still I kiss her eyes."  And I do. :-)  Thank you.

Sven,
Thank you for reading.  I'm glad you liked this, my friend.

Susan,
Yes, and those are such sweet tears.  I'm glad this touched you in such a special way.  Thank you, my friend and hugs to you.

magnolia,
Yes, she's a most precious friend.  Thank you for reading.

Jennifer,
I thank you for coming by and reading.  That's sweet. :-)

Everyone, thank you so much.
Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

saved_by_grace
Member

since 2005-01-08

Posts 332
In the arms of God...

12 posted 2005-06-12 11:13 AM

kissing your eyes, Michael...

~ Becka

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