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The hidden valley
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The hidden valley |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Within the bosom of this land In valley blessed with peaceful time The hills of green reach for the sky While earth and nature join to rhyme The vision speaks in voice of calm Body slows to rest in peace Nothing seen to threat or harm The scape, a brilliant masterpiece A valley hidden from the world Where peace and love come home A place where one can happy be Where one might seek some time alone To be at one with nature To search within ones soul To contemplate the facts of life To set ones sights upon a goal |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
.... to be at one with nature, to search within one's soul... Fabulous writing Rick...I enjoyed your poem very much - Bravo Bello! Roniece  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sounds like a nice place to be..at one with anything..... enjoyed the read |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh, to be at one with nature ... my favorite place to be. Beautiful sentiments and phrasing Rick!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Rick~ This was a delight to read, you have beautiful imagery and sentiments here Take care, Melissa~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Rick, the pace of this piece is as smooth as the beautiful images your words bring to my mind. I dearly love writings about nature, and home, and the simple joys of life....wonderfully done!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 07-02-2001).] |
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