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I Can't Forget About You
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I Can't Forget About You |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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I've got to say one thing, If I could change your mind I'd be happy again. In every dream and every thought I see your face, Smiling at me. Girl from my heart strings, I can feel the sadness churn in me, like the wind upon a falling leaf spinning me round and round. Oh how my crying mind drives me insane. I can hear your mystic voice calling my name. If I could change it all I'd still be with you, now that I know the truth. I'm like a gypsy with nowhere to be. I got a crazy magic potion working in me. I'm caught in my heart and I can't break free you're stuck in my mind.....and you're so real now I can't forget about you. No I can't forget about you. © Eric True This got lost in an open changeover so I'm reposting it. The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of some that I felt I could not forget about...but with disappointments and time the memories and the feelings fade...hopefully happiness and experiences will keep you together...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
PT dear friend, you know how much I love it when you write and this one is utterly fabulous. Always you have an outstanding and brilliant touch. Yes love this is truly fabulous. I've missed too much good poetry to let this one slip past me. Take care love as always Mushy  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If that 'getting lost' should ever happen again in a changeover, just notify a mod, for we surely wouldn't let things like this get by us.... nope, not the good stuff.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ And, I got lost in your lovely song. Beautiful in the key of blue. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Thank you for not forgetting me ethome...lolo  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"I'm caught in my heart and I can't break free" this line just grips me...helen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh how my crying mind drives me insane. I can hear your mystic voice calling my name. If I could change it all I'd still be with you, now that I know the truth. I'm like a gypsy with nowhere to be. I got a crazy magic potion working in me. I'm caught in my heart and I can't break free you're stuck in my mind.....and you're so real now I can't forget about you. No I can't forget about you. =============================== Classic bluesy rhymes to define the ache that never leaves us written with your gifted soulful pen... ya make us feel every word ... and thats a good thing beautiful tune E-babes Passions own jukebox hit maker We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Now what can I say that hasnt already been said sweet poet man...'cept I still hear you singing every day...this lil MM well I will beahve....heheheh |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
What a sincere and lovely poem. I know the feeling. Sometimes we meet someone, and unexpectedly they live in our hearts forever, no matter where they go. I must believe there is a reason for this. I tell myself that someday (maybe not here in this world) it will all make sense...  Until you are are near it, you will never see it, until you live it you will never know it...this is why we must not judge it. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Awesome write - "that old black magic.." must be in the air. let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You've captured the feeling of being hopelessly in love, captured in your own heart - oh, how I love so many of the lines in this poem Well done, my friend Liz |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Excellent write, ethome...love the message and the flow of this one...great work! sp everytime I close my eyes, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric--I always know I'm in for a treat when I see your name...thanks for being you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Well, I am glad I didn't miss this one! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I have to agree, this is so beautifully written. Sauni Sauni :) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you for reposting... for to have missed this would be such a loss. *S* This aches in such a familiar way - I'd swear you sneak in and read my diaries if your poems were more chaotic... but instead, the rhythm flows. LOL. Superb writing, ethome! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Glad that ive visit your homepage, readed this one too, and found it far away between these blue pages. this is another one from you that have touched my heart. (((Hugs))) Charisma |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
I love the way you've written this. It's very original and very good. My compliments, ethome! Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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