Open Poetry #14 |
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Morning Has Broken ( 9 Haiku) |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada ![]() |
![]() ~* Morning Has Broken *~Shaking her cloud bed, Mother Nature awakens. The world is alive. The gentle wind blows, Kissing the cool mountaintops Pale cheeks of fresh snow. The sleepy sun smiles. Sunflowers open their eyes. Morning is dawning. A rock, sitting cold still and motionless in sun, Is warming slowly. (thanks Sunshine) Row on row of trees All lazily stretch upward. And leaves float softly. Opening petals, The beautiful little buds All reach for the sun. A soft breeze blows by. Merrily the flowers dance. Listen. The wind calls. While playful squirrels full of joy and happiness Gather their treasure. Spirits now will soar, As we are one with the earth, Morning has broken. art: Peter Ellis "Splendor of the Tetons" ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-08-2001).] |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
caressed earth gently with early golden sunbeams shining transparant |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You do write beautifully, yanno! ![]() |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
What a wondrous way to have my breakfast, Mysteria! It's one of my favorite songs and your poem is a delightfully refreshing accompaniment! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
My spirits certainly soar after reading this. Excellence in craftmanship ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Charisma: Now that is what I meant to say ![]() Temptress: Wow, you still awake? Me too, ![]() Thank you for the wonderful compliment. VAS: Thank you and I hope no one was making barbequed eggs for breakfast while you were enjoying this? ![]() Interloper: Thank you so much I had hoped to lift some spirits today, and one is a very good start to my quota, thank you. ![]() |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
~*~ in beauty of day golden rays of delight come and smile down on me ~*~ |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lady In White: What a simply charming response! |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Serenely embracing, beautiful, and cleverly woven verses of insight ~ enchanting visions into the realms of all that awaits us within the boundaries of a new day... Verly lovely and captivating!!!!!!!!!! Hugs and smiles to you....love ya muches, dawn (A's...D) |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ This is truly lovely. Morning Has Broken has a VERY special meaning to me ... I thank you for a gentle reminder ... Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mysteria, OOoOoOOOooo! I just LOVE haikus! And you did these sooo beautifully! This is going into my library.. so soft and exquisite.. I'm so glad I saw this ![]() TaraB |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martha this "journal" of thanks is muchly appreciated. White Feather, I trust the memory is a good one! I am glad you liked this one and it lifted your spirits. rosepetals25: I am so happy to be in your library - thank you! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
A string of haikus is like a string of pearls. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
S. Aruthur Grey, that was a very poetic comment, lovely! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is so very nice written. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Titia: thank you - was kinda hard to do actually. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
this is absolutely beautiful and what better way to have my morning cup of coffee and read your lovely poem ![]() |
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