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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-07-01 08:31 PM


Oh this is the racing time I know
for just one moment my poem did glow
not that I actually really care
for my poem will be always there

But every night when I'm sitting here
is the time you enjoy your dinner dear
by the time you look at your monitorcage
It's already flown far to the second page

I don't care as I've just said before
In dreamland I'll be and maybe I'll snore
So have a nice evening my lovely friend
when I get up just to your bed you went

I hope you'll have some very nice time
lots of feelings, happiness and rhyme
I just have enjoyed myself being here
to read and cherish your poetry dear


              

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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© Copyright 2001 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-07-01 08:45 PM


Someone's having fun with the smilies...this was charming, just like you!
Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-07-01 09:23 PM


Thanks Sunshine, I love the smilies  

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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3 posted 2001-07-01 10:29 PM


Ah Titia, darn time difference ... I know I have friends 1/2 way around the world, but know this I read them and this was a keeper my friend!  Nice work.

If I have made you smile today, then I have done my job!    ~* Mysteria *~

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2001-07-01 10:34 PM


This was wonderful Titia ... with so many of us around the world, there is always someone awake, reading and writing .... thank goodness this place stays open 24 hrs a day. Much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2001-07-02 11:57 AM


And I, we, have enjoyed you being here as well  
VAS
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6 posted 2001-07-02 12:11 PM




[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 07-02-2001).]

Titia Geertman
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7 posted 2001-07-02 01:29 PM


Mysteria, thank you, this just popped into my head as I was closing.

Kit, thank goodness there's internet, chance to meet so many lovely friends.

Interloper, glad you've enjoyed  

VAS,    


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Nan
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8 posted 2001-07-02 03:34 PM


Cute - Let's pop this up for another round...

Lone Wolf
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9 posted 2001-07-02 04:03 PM


Very cute and clever, Titia!  Much enjoyed!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Titia Geertman
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10 posted 2001-07-12 08:01 PM


Nan, thanks, same to Lone Wolf. Just saw your replies today, sorry.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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