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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-07-01 07:04 PM


             
revival of trees
sunshine in early morning
make the leaves come out
             
a season has passed
their task being accomplished
production of seeds
       
survival of trees
life been withdrawn in their bark
may they rest in peace



Took me a lifetime to get these pictures in(LOL)

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-01-2001).]

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Balladeer
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1 posted 2001-07-01 07:25 PM


Whew! I was hoping you weren't standing out there all that time to get the proper shots!  

Very nicely done, Titia...

Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-07-01 07:39 PM


Thanks Balladeer, no I wasn't but it sure felt that way. Every time I copied a new picture from my website, the other in Passions was gone, couldn't go back and forward, so I've edited it at least 7 times to get it right

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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3 posted 2001-07-02 11:53 AM


Titia, you are getting so very good at these
VAS
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4 posted 2001-07-02 12:16 PM


These are lovely and your words, wonderful! I'm so happy you persevered to getting them all pictured and 'scored' with poetry.
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5 posted 2001-07-02 12:18 PM


I know a friend of ours who will love seeing these...well done, and thank you for your persistence in getting it right the 7th time around!
Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2001-07-02 01:22 PM


Thank you so much Interloper, your words make me

Vas, I'm like a terriertype, very persistant when I want something done.

Lady in white, feel free to show your friend

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Poeminister
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7 posted 2001-07-03 12:26 PM


Titia, These are beautiful.  Very nicely done.
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8 posted 2001-07-03 01:22 AM


Titia, I echo what our PoetFriends above have said...

Your words on page blue are beautiful and the imagery is excellent...

Thank you for an enjoyed read
*~coco~*

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-07-12 08:02 PM


Poeminister and CocoBaci, thanks for enjoying. Sorry for not thanking you earlier.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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