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Qumar Fatthi
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0 posted 2001-05-24 03:10 AM


Please pray for me
I hear from all persons
Love is blind
Love is not good
Love gives pain
Love demand secrifices
But
I want to fall in love
Because
I want to see
The change of blossems into flowers
The change of automn into spring
The change of childhood into adult
Please
Pray for me
I want to fall in love  


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Waseem Cheema
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1 posted 2001-05-24 03:22 AM


Ok I will pray for you.....
But my dear
you will know very soon the taste of that pain and sacrifices when you will come to tha world of Love

Qumar Fatthi
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2 posted 2001-05-24 04:18 AM


thanx cheemay
for suggestions about my all poems
and appreciate me


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-05-24 06:38 AM


So be it...you will fall in love...it is available to all of us...I hope for happiness for you...James
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-05-24 07:15 AM


Qumar~
There is such joy in love ...
everyone should go there and remain.
I would wish this for you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-05-24 07:47 AM


Go for it my dear to discover how....

The blossems change into flowers
The automn change into spring
The childhood change into adult

for there's love outthere for every one.

Titia

helen smith
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6 posted 2001-07-08 09:28 PM


I will pray for you fatthi  ..but you have been warned ...luckily none of us ever listens .......
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
7 posted 2001-07-08 10:49 PM




Are you sure you want us to pray for you for that???.....Are you absolutely and definitely sure?.......

We'll pray for you.......to see....

"The change of blossems into flowers
The change of automn into spring
The change of childhood into adult"

thank you
**************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

SEA
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with you
8 posted 2001-07-08 11:27 PM


I love the way you describe love....sometimes it does hurt, but sometimes it's a beautiful ache   saving this one  
serenity blaze
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9 posted 2001-07-08 11:46 PM


either way? I'll pray for you...   such yearning here...
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