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Sweet Destiny
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Sweet Destiny |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Sweet Destiny Roughened by years of molding- You are a beauty to behold… The wind that dances in your eyes- Returns my love in ancient old. Beyond amazing depths of grace- I stumbled ‘neath your path… To surrender my soul in obsession- ‘Lest I watch you swiftly pass. I breathe the scent of you and I- Mingled upon hastened skin… I melt myself upon thee- Just to feel you within. Desire upon adoration- My own fate hath been sealed… Within deepest love so tender- Is my lasting passion sealed... To love you, Love, has turned to be, My mark of faith, sweet Destiny. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetDevina~ Lovely thoughts you bring us ... Always good to see your smile ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
for some of us, Destiny is wonderful. . . so glad that it is for you. . . excellent. . . nice to see you again hon. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Devina, this is absolutely wonderful writing....just beautiful. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful with the romance of the Brownings, surely, and a touch of 21st century. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
to have ones fate sealed like this would be wonderful. Great poem. Enjoyed it |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How I have missed you, my sweet soul sis!!!! Where have ya been? (don't answer that until you consult your attorney!)  I loved the ending couplet here--sweet writing as ever, your trademark--Hugs and welcome home! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
devina, Beautifully written I loved the last two lines... perfect ending TaraB |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
great rhythm and flow here beautiful writing Beyond amazing depths of grace- I stumbled ‘neath your path… To surrender my soul in obsession- ‘Lest I watch you swiftly pass. "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Devina--Lovely writing. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
You have a wonderful way with this subject. Beautiful. I am many. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
All I can say is this is BEAUTIFUL! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i love your poem Devina |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
This is a great piece of work and very touching too!!!  I can't control |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I would like to thank you all for your responses...at last I've found my destiny and I had hoped that it would be reflected in this piece...TY all again!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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