Open Poetry #14 |
The Princess to Her Guardian Spirit (Co written with Logan) |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I thank you, Logan, for your gift of friendship and your gift of writing with me. It was an honor as it will always be. What was, is now again. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Princess: Sir I knock here on your door, Guardian: i answer your knock with a smile Princess: Yesterday I felt you here, sir Guardian: and today, you were in my thoughts as we are bound in a circle neverending Princess: And bound I was by needing you, Knowing that you felt and would come Guardian: as a whisper on the wind called out your pain Princess: Ohh...I knew you would come and here you stand Guardian: as was before and ever is when i hear your name or feel your pain to lift you up and brush you off Princess: Is pain a more noble thing, dear sir I ask your guidance true Guardian: to feel pain is to have lived life, as all life has pain the pain has us appreciate the goodness that follows in its path we live on the side of the mountain, fair maid the peak is the ectasy, the valley the depths of despair Princess: I live among the despairing valleys, sir And the ecstasies are far out of reach Guardian: then the sun is for you to seek to wash the gloom from your aching heart as you called my name, my hand decends Princess: Guardian, you know this lady well, Although your eyes have only noticed me in dreams or such Guardian: but my soul is what feels and hears the soft sighs to reach beyond the words, to warm the very depths Princess: Then I know you've followed me as I plunged, A lesson awaiting for me there, Guardian: to chase the coldness away from within to feel the warmth reach the lips, to curl into a smile Princess: And now I smile through my tears, For fears that you have taken Guardian: and a soft laugh bubbles like water over the rock a silvery sound to lighten the soul as the past is left behind to trouble no more Princess: I receive your laughter, Guardian: the gloom of the valley falls prey to the golden rays Princess: And your smile, it guides my soul. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
Nice you two.. You both work well together.. I felt as if I were right there watching. I hope to see more! "You live you learn and life moves on" |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
On-looker : Why you two noble people have created a poem of such charm . You realy do work well together . You should turn it into a stage play . Thanks very much . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Snowdwen: It has been a pleasure talking to you, reading your work, and to know you're reading mine. Thank you for your kind words all around. Angelswing: My Guardian knows me well and offers a gentle place to rest my head. A wonderful friend and I hope to do more of this with him in the future as he doesn't write poetry often. Thank you for your kindness. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress~ This is such a lovely melding of spirits~ Very poignantly portrayed. Nice work ... both of you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Wonderful piece! Hope to see more collabs in the future! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done. . . I really like the play between the two. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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RLS106 New Member
since 2001-03-31
Posts 7TX, U.S. A. |
Dare is as Dare does, after I clear my head of my own personal sexual metaphor. I can feel the pull the two of you entwinded together to make a very good poem; true wordsmiths you both are. (c) RLS 1975-2001,ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
there is always an element of pain in any relationship, but sometimes you just gotta take that chance! Kathleen Blake |
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