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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2001-07-02 01:56 PM



Leave the old photo album
On the roadside
Between Cleveland
And hell
Forgetting memories
She spits at you
Drive off in your mint 56 Mustang
Toward Vegas
Drunk
Gambling slurred emotions
At Elvis's all night wedding chapel
Waking up to a stranger
Looking like Dr Ruth
On acid
Bleed happy thoughts
Till you float away
And never have
To come back here again
Laughing all the way to Nashville
Write a top 40 song
About a life gone wrong
And the wiener dog
That you ran over ten miles back
Swimming in pools of Washingtons
Till your Dr Ruth impersonator
Wakes you up with an image of big lips
Coming straight for your face
With a big slobbery kiss

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1 posted 2001-07-02 02:03 PM


Man.. I want to see that  56 Mustang...

Interesting read...


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2 posted 2001-07-02 02:07 PM


Quite funny, Brad!!!! And I could tell you a very funny story about just this sort of thing, but this is a family forum!   Thanks for the laugh tho!
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3 posted 2001-07-02 02:11 PM


Yeah, more about the '56 Mustang
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4 posted 2001-07-02 04:11 PM


Country music is scary enough without using acid. enjoyed the read.

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5 posted 2001-07-02 04:13 PM


ROFL, this was funny!

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6 posted 2001-07-02 10:55 PM


ROTFL!      
TOO FUNNY!

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