Open Poetry #14 |
The Night I Love Unfailingly |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
The night stood in my doorway, And this time I vowed not to let him in, For many a night he teased me, And let me in on his little game. The game of the hunt for my spirit, And the idea to have my smile on the run, Wicked.. His betrayal Appealing to my healing sense, Bring me the breeze to kiss my lips, And nibble my ears at the same time. Filling me with a new hope, And then abruptly Filling himself with you, And then I'm done in, He knows I cannot resist his final ploy. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Don't let that little rascal in!!! Kathleen Blake |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Temptress, Temptation ~sighs~ you have to learn how to resist it. Great write TaraB |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Temptress, Temptation ~sighs~ you have to learn how to resist it. Great write TaraB |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Temptress, Sorry about the double posts.. when I was doing it.. they weren't showing up! lol. oops? TaraB [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
great write... but you must resist! (resistance is futile!) you can still win free! (you will be assimilated!) don't let it happen hehehe -Napalm
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
night has a way of speaking to that most basic part of us. . .you've shown that well here. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
A beautiful oldie! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done. And, when that knight comes, be sure to open the door |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
really like this... nicely written... nicely expressive in the form and image... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, most gentle one,,,very gentle smile, you know you are strong enough and beside, you have a guardian always with you. I love seeing your strength coming forth..gentle smile |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I cannot resist his touch.I hate to admit how I relate to this. |
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