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Temptress
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0 posted 2001-05-22 08:43 PM


The night stood in my doorway,
And this time I vowed not to let him in,
For many a night he teased me,
And let me in on his little game.
The game of the hunt for my spirit,
And the idea to have my smile on the run,
Wicked..
His betrayal
Appealing to my healing sense,
Bring me the breeze to kiss my lips,
And nibble my ears at the same time.
Filling me with a new hope,
And then abruptly
Filling himself with you,
And then I'm done in,
He knows I cannot resist his final ploy.



© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-05-22 10:16 PM


Don't let that little rascal in!!!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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2 posted 2001-05-22 11:52 PM


Temptress,

      Temptation ~sighs~ you have to learn how to resist it. Great write

TaraB

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3 posted 2001-05-22 11:52 PM


Temptress,

      Temptation ~sighs~ you have to learn how to resist it. Great write

TaraB

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4 posted 2001-05-22 11:55 PM


Temptress,

      Sorry about the double posts.. when I was doing it.. they weren't showing up!  lol. oops?
TaraB

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 05-23-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-05-23 12:10 PM


great write... but you must resist! (resistance is futile!) you can still win free! (you will be assimilated!) don't let it happen   hehehe
-Napalm


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6 posted 2001-05-23 08:42 PM


night has a way of speaking to that most basic part of us. . .you've shown that well here. . .

excellent. . .

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7 posted 2001-07-02 02:17 PM


A beautiful oldie!
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8 posted 2001-07-02 02:26 PM


Well done.  And, when that knight comes, be sure to open the door
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9 posted 2001-07-02 02:33 PM


really like this... nicely written...
nicely expressive in the form and image...

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10 posted 2001-07-02 09:38 PM


Ahhh, most gentle one,,,very gentle smile, you know you are strong enough and beside, you have a guardian always with you. I love seeing your strength coming forth..gentle smile
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11 posted 2001-07-02 10:38 PM


I cannot resist his touch.I hate to admit how I relate to this.
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