Open Poetry #14 |
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BAHNAIN (Sisters) |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan ![]() |
SISTERS Kitni he masoom hoti hain yeh piyari bahnain How much innocent the sweet sisters are Kitni he bholi hoti hain yeh piyari bahnain How much simple the sweet sisters are Apni yadain choer kar babul k ghur main Leaving their memories at father's home Kudh parai ho jati hain yeh piyari bahnain Use to become their selves strangers, these sweet sisters Kitni khushi hoti hey humain uss waqat jub How much we become happy when English main pass ho jati hain yeh piyari bahnain Passed their English examination, these sweet sisters Her mushkil main bun jati hain sahara yeh hamara They become our support in every difficulty Kis kadar bhaeyoon k naz uthati hain yeh piyari bahnain How much take responsibilities of brothers, these sweet sisters Mari too yahi dua yeh jiss hall main bi hain Its my prayer, whatever..wherever, they are living sudda yunhein muskurati raheen yeh piyari bahnain Always keep smiling, these sweet sisters Bahnoon ki qadar un say phooch kar dakhoo Waseem Ask the values of sisters to those Waseem Jin ki hoti naheen hein koe piyari bahnain Who there have no sweet sisters ~Wasi~ **Usually some sisters not show so much interst in English subject while studying...in East... I love to nice poetry. [This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 07-01-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...Her mushkil main bun jati hain sahara yeh hamara They become our support in every difficulty... for some reason, Waseem, this line seems to be very important and touches me. Thank you! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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Yanno...I truly love your work. Please don't stop posting. You give me insight to the heartbeat of other lands and new understanding that somehow translates-- THE SAME. Peace, Waseem. Oh, and hey? what does Waseem mean? [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-01-2001).] |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
ahhhh waseem a longing for your sisters ...and then they have babies and present them to you ,Uncle waseem ... they never become strangers and they will never stop mothering a little brother ...nice poem |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
I am very greatful to you all especially serenity..........thanx |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Waseem~ This is special ! ~*Marge*~ BP~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hey Wasi ![]() this is really wonderful ![]() "Mari too yahi dua yeh jiss hall main bi hain Its my prayer, whatever..wherever, they are living sudda yunhein muskurati raheen yeh piyari bahnain Always keep smiling, these sweet sisters" liked this very much ![]() |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Hi, Thanx for this appriciation ......I am very glad to read your commentts.......... ![]() A ![]() |
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