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Dragon Wings
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Dragon Wings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Dragon Wings If only I had dragon wings I’d hover o’er the why of things. I’d singe the tail of muse in flight And breath more fire into right. I’d soar the mundane of each day Just leave it and I’d fly away. I’d find the magic of the clouds The lightening of the thunders loud The rainbows end its pot of gold The start and finish of unfold I’d search the primal forest green Savor the beauty of the scene I’d fly with all the butterflies And dance with them above the whys Watch colors of the sun below Watch changes of the moons shadow. No end of watching lovely things If only I had dragon wings. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Someone will find warm reception if a thoughtful muse has intention of winging in to visit you, here ~ so I shall scurry on out, my dear! Enjoyed! But then, I ALWAYS do! |
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Lisa Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 88Lunenburg,VT USA |
I liked this, thought provoking and I liked the imagery. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love the idea of the whole poem......I hope it's not a cover up for that randy dragon Janet Marie mentioned.......you might be soaring and looking for something not mentioned in this fine poem..........If so, I hope you find it!! He he great poem! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
And here the great Knight Sy dreams of dragon wings...wonderful imagery Sir Sy!  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
If only . . . that would be too cool!!  All writing comes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You already do have wings to fly the wind beneath them ... a butterfly's sigh If you dream of flying to butterfly land you need only open your mind and take my hand We'll fly over rainbows and oceans of blue soar into sunsets awash in violet hues We'll dance on the stars and hang the moon do it all again tomorrow should the dream end too soon So do you dare to dream like a dragonfly you wont know if you dont try *winkiewinkie*  me   [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 06-30-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you sweet. *L* Lisa, Thank you for the read and nice comment. Ethome, You caught me. LOL Lone Wolf, I like too cool. Thank you for the read and cute comment. Poet deVine, Sir Sy sais you may take a giant step. JM, I can only answer this with an Email. Winkiewinkie, Stinky |
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