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Rain
Junior Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 21
Atlanta, GA

0 posted 2001-05-24 01:33 AM

Fragile illusions
gaze back at me in
shadowed mirrors
awash in tear stains
like the pastels of color
running hopelessly together
that have lost their borders

I wait for time to pass
For a morning that I wake
seeing clearly where I end
For distinct lines
I can't see through
For moments lived
in the present
and years buried
in the past

I wait for time

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2001-05-24 01:46 AM

But we all have time...its how we choose to use it that makes our lives what they are...great write

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-24 01:49 AM

Today is tomorrow, clearer I'm sure it will be. Wonderful, pen.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2001-05-24 05:37 PM

enjoy

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-05-25 10:44 PM

well done. . . an excellent picture of how time is always there. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

5 posted 2001-06-02 06:38 PM

time is the great healer, enjoyed the read

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

6 posted 2001-06-02 08:37 PM

good read. It is better to wait on time cause time waits on no one

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-06-02 08:59 PM

Fragile illusions
gaze back at me in
shadowed mirrors
awash in tear stains
==========================
I wait for time to pass
For a morning that I wake
seeing clearly where I end
For distinct lines
I can't see through
For moments lived
in the present
and years buried
in the past
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you have expresses alot of emotion and intensity in a few well chosen words and images...
succinct and deep.
well done postess

Im searchin for my warrior
walkin the tracks of time
this struggle to seek forgiveness
like chains and shackles...these ghosts of mine

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

8 posted 2001-06-02 10:40 PM

Waiting on time...certain it will come. Enjoyed!

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

9 posted 2001-06-02 11:57 PM

Oh, I enjoyed this! A great write!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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