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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-06-29 10:49 PM

When Voices Speak

when Voices speak, I listen, true
for they hold words, of you, and you
and soon a treasure we will own
words will follow, as they are shown

in black and white, or blue on blue
all shall hold words of ~ you ~ and ~ you ~
it will be mine, your treasures, true
to last me, then, my through and through

ah, Voices…they shall come and soon
for I’ve heard them in pale of moon
I’ve felt them in the voice of tears
and reminisced them through the years

voices, soon, they will come, at last
bring the past, and then hold, us, fast

Logan
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1 posted 2001-06-29 10:51 PM

Yes, very gentle smile, when voices speak, it is wise to listen..Very well done, Sis, I like this..

Balladeer

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2 posted 2001-06-29 11:08 PM

beautiful writing, Sunshine

Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-06-29 11:22 PM

Voices come from many different places...very nicely written.

Sunshine

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4 posted 2001-06-30 05:06 PM

Thank you...as this was written, I saw that I was not only referring to one "voice" but several...and then of course, there will be the book....

so glad you all enjoyed!

Marge Tindal

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5 posted 2001-06-30 09:56 PM

Karilea~
Beautifully written ... a lovely read.

LOL @ Voices, soon ...
You sure Ron didn't write this ?
Is this one of those 'clue' things ?????

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine

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6 posted 2001-06-30 10:01 PM

Marge...yes, right, Ron really wrote this...or he would have, "soon"...[laughing]....thank you!

Kethry
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7 posted 2001-06-30 10:04 PM

Sunshine,
is this like a paper trail, Find the clues get the book.
I liked this is was so smooth and soft.
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Sunshine

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8 posted 2001-06-30 10:07 PM

Kethry...it just happened to all tie in together with my mood...those voices that tell us to write, write, write, and the fact that one day, we shall all hold Voices in our hand, a permanent reminder that we all came together in unison to lift our...voices!

SmittenKitten
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9 posted 2001-06-30 11:33 PM

Sunshine, your poem feels like a gentle welcome, telling me to write. To be a voice, to listen to the voices, to be a part of it all. This was a wonderful read

~Krista

Honeybee
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10 posted 2001-06-30 11:47 PM

What a serene and beautiful poem, Karilea

Take care,
Melissa~

Sunshine

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11 posted 2001-07-01 08:06 AM

Krista, thank you so much for telling me that you received a feel from this poem...that message alone...tells me I reached one soul...now...go write! And share!

Melybee...thank you so very much for coming in to read....be well....

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

12 posted 2001-07-02 10:58 AM

ah, the voices speak
shall we listen and heed them
if we care we will

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-02-2001).]

Lone Wolf
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13 posted 2001-07-02 11:29 AM

There truly are many voices to be heard. Perhaps if we all stopped and took the time to listen, the world would be a better place. Nice write.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Rex Allen McCoy
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14 posted 2001-07-02 11:48 AM

I wish I had the time to listen to my Little Voices more often than I do these days ... but I have so much to do lately, I feel guilty just taking the time to read such lovely writing ... I try to sit up some nights, to write a little something, but just fall asleep in the chair ... oh well ... Life Cycles ... I hope

Rex

Cpat Hair

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15 posted 2001-07-02 01:43 PM

interesting write... the idea of voices being not only what we write or speak but the ones around us as well... we are a cumulative voice... the culmination of all we hear and have said..wrapped between bound pages... hmmm...

Voices

Speak no less
of now
than they do
of yesterday
still this
edition
is is being
edited
while we
read

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