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Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

0 posted 2001-06-29 01:28 PM

In-Between-Lovers

Cold and lonely
For the dawning of July
Waiting despite my will
Not knowing when one will arrive

Cold and lonely
Still not knowing why
Crept upon by summers deep chill
Just trying to survive

Cold and lonely
Besieged by boredom, fye!
Of his sweet kiss still
To be eternally deprived

Cold and lonely
Not strength enough to cry
So another sweet pill gone
Ushering more time-passed-by

This is what it's like
To be in-between-lovers
While the last runs back
To the apron strings of his mother!

I'm cold and lonely
For another bitter July.

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-06-29 01:30 PM

another bitter July...

I liked the poem a great deal. and I hope July can become as sweet as the blackberries it produces and as warm as the sun it embraces...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-29 02:14 PM

Well done. Get out there in the hunt, that will warm you up

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-06-29 02:27 PM

Very sad and melancoly write...but very well done nevertheless! Time to get out and find a grown up one!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-06-29 04:17 PM

Not crazy about those inbetween times...good and bad...time to think...time to be lonely...James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-06-29 04:41 PM

SecretWhisper~

'Cold and lonely
Not strength enough to cry'

Whew ... went there once ... didn't like it~
Returned to the land of the living.

This is a deeply-emoted vehicle of sadness.
Well written.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Maverick Wolf
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 94
Scandia, MN

6 posted 2001-08-08 11:29 PM

The time between. Time to think. Time to recollect. Time to regroup. Time to be. Let yourself be. Let yourself be free.

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