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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-06-29 12:07 PM


To You my Poet Friends:


Page of White

To grasp the power of  belief
And scroll it on a golden leaf
For other souls to then behold
Is much more precious than the gold

To seek a dream, though worn with age
Inscribing it on parchment page
Is but a gift of hope you give
To those who never learned to live

The visions etched in prism light
When written on a page of white
Bring rainbow colors to one’s life
Enveloping the moment’s strife

The beauty in the hills of green
When placed upon a paper’s sheen
Become alive, an Eden home
That flourishes beneath God’s dome

The joy of love, the pain of loss
That dwell within an inkwell’s gloss
Are treasured words that cause a tear
To fall upon a listening ear

To lay your heart in morning’s glow
On crest of crystal virgin snow
Is but a dainty print that gleams
Of who you are or what it seems

A poem that speaks in depth and grace
That mirrors eyes and soul and face
Will find a harbor in the minds
Of all of those who’ve read your rhymes

A poem is made of words you sift
Ethereal sands, a treasured gift

Elizabeth Santos

(And this is what you do, my friends, when I read your poetry)

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 06-29-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-06-29 12:09 PM


and then...Lady Santos, after having come to read all of her poet friends' verse...

lets us know, through pen and deed, we've only just begun
rehearse...

Brava Lady Santos...brava!

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 06-29-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-06-29 12:13 PM


always so beautiful and so soft Elizabeth   this is wonderful  
VAS
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3 posted 2001-06-29 12:17 PM


Wonderfully beautiful, wonderful to ponder such tender musings.
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4 posted 2001-06-29 12:25 PM


LizzieLove~
You tender a render sublime !

Thank you for the sweet verse.
Appreciation likewise noted, my friend.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-06-29 01:04 PM


and this is what you do, when I read your poetry. . .

beautiful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2001-06-29 01:38 PM


Wow.
ethome
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7 posted 2001-06-29 02:37 PM


Elizabeth I love all the verses and thier separate descriptions of the joy of writing poems.......I especially love this summation ....

                           "A poem that speaks in depth and grace
                                That mirrors eyes and soul and face
                                  Will find a harbor in the minds
                              Of all of those who’ve read your rhymes

                                 A poem is made of words you sift
                                 Ethereal sands, a treasured gift"

Truly are treasured gifts just as you are a treasure yourself.....I really enjoyed this and once again compliment you!

illusion
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8 posted 2001-06-29 03:08 PM


You've described the lure so very well. This is beautiful!  
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9 posted 2001-06-29 05:12 PM


A poem that speaks in depth and grace
That mirrors eyes and soul and face
Will find a harbor in the minds
Of all of those who’ve read your rhymes

A poem is made of words you sift
Ethereal sands, a treasured gift

Lady Santos, you've just given us another gift to treasure... something that happens every time you write! *S* Beautiful!

ThUnDeRkYsS
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10 posted 2001-06-29 06:04 PM


Thank you for penning us such wonderful verse    Now and always  

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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