Open Poetry #14 |
The Many Disguises Of You |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
You are the mist that lies low over the valley Your presence moves with the wind through the trees You're the gull that glides over the ocean Your love is so welcome like a warm Summer's breeze You are the first Spring flower in the meadow After the cold of the Winter is no more You are the falling Autumn leaves That land softly on the grassy floor You are the embers that burn brightly in the fire And the reason I keep coming back for more You are the chain of gold around my neck And the key to my heart's door So many images of you are all around me In nature you take on many a disguise So may beautiful qualities I see Whenever I gaze deeply into your eyes Suetang |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Ah the sounds and sights of Love. Lucky you. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful lines full of precious metaphors of love! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Truly a wonderful expression of your Love... Liked this lots Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all......I'm glad you enjoyed this. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ What a lovely look at your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yep... sounds like love to me... nicely done !!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Suetang, this is very lovely! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yep... even sound prettier this time I read it... you have a way with images... one I enjoy |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: This is lovely! Has a beautiful atsmosphere to it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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