Open Poetry #14 |
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Winner's Circle |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Winner's Circle I am at the starting gate to race this race I've had to wait stopped before by many things heavy chains and broken wings it is my turn to win a race disappointments to replace no obstacles to stop me this time the winner's circle it is mine "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
You were always a winner, so go for the gold here also...very nicely done as usual..gentle smile |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautifully written, I enjoyed it very much. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
quite daring and interesting. the rhyming is cool and the "breaking out of mold" subject is cool. nice job |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Fly Pegasus Fly! "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The checkered flag is yours...enjoy it! |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
We each have already won before the race has even begun. Enjoyed this, Helen. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nicely done... you keep running and keep trying ..till you win! BUT I do think you already a winner... perhaps just not recognized in all areas as of yet.. |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
You are a WINNER. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
go for it. . . you've always been a winner. . . you just never got the prize. . . well done. . . ![]() --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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