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Open Poetry #14

Jealous

Trina
Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 97

0 posted 2001-06-28 09:55 PM

Giving me the evil eye
while I walk around
looking cute with my dimples
and my long brown hair
with your former man at my side

You look at me enviously
trying to find my every flaw
to go point out to your friends
and laugh a while
at nothing of importance

Doing everything to get close
and get me out the picture
well, you had your turn
now in his eyes
it's my time to shine

I'm walking around
just as happy as can be
see I have no insecurities
I don't need to judge and analyze
you or any other female

You are no on to me
not even an enemy
you are just a very insecure girl
with many flaws
your biggest flaw of all
is being a hater

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-28 10:01 PM

Welcome to Passions! Check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2001-06-28 10:13 PM

Welcome to the family. You will find that I closed this poem in Teen Poetry 5 but left the one open in Critical Analysis. Please check the guidelines about posting the same poem in multiple forums. Thanks!

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