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Summer Soul Music
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Summer Soul Music |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Soul music without instruments the subtle shading of the words To strike a chord of summertime in resonance there to be heard The splash of feet on phrase set free cascade of water pure and swift The azure brilliance high above reflecting crystal waves that drift The smell of Autumn far away a spring rain bare-foot child again The visions of a bygone day all this to see as clear as when These images first graced our sight and caused us to reach out and touch This serenade at times I fear we miss perhaps a bit too much Vacation tugs this writers' hand from reverie upon the page While summers' sweet soul music plays I will be otherwise engaged |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm sitting here in New Orleans with no a/c today...so naturally this WOULD catch my eye. A great title for a beautiful poem. This one was a mood enhancer--  ---THANK YOU!!!  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely captures the images..and drifts... gently from line to line.. a great read... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Great work, Doc...it is wonderful to get caught up in the beauty of music...I really enjoyed this...very cool write, and fantastic images! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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