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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-06-28 03:51 PM

traces---in
a touch of dark,
linger light's imprint.
graces---three,
a glint of spark,
of chalice kissing chalice brim.
a flash of free,
through depths of me...
--enfolded--
     see, ye, now my wings?
Hear my moan,
  of thing newborn,
     bird that waits
for cue to sing...
  and I have flown
     the skies of free,
tasted moons of mighty mead...

I have done all done can do,
I pray you see the best in me.

(repost from Open #9--with love for "you"

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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-06-28 03:53 PM

so very nicely done...
enjoyed this one a great deal...and certainly glad you reposted..even if it wasn't for "me" ( grinning)

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-06-28 03:59 PM

Well it sure wasn't for me

but I sure see the best of you! But then again don't we always see the best of you in your poetry, oh gifted one! Enjoyed this, thanks for reposting.

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2001-06-28 10:30 PM

Not for me either, but I can see the best in you my friend. Anyone with one eye and half a brain can...

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2001-06-28 10:31 PM

Thats not to say that I only have one eye and half a brain....LOL

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2001-06-29 12:41 PM

CH, Mysteria and PdV....thanks for reading, I didn't mean to be mysterious--in fact, funny thing? I thought I reposted this for him, but actually? I think it was for ME. HUGS to you three for your understanding!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-29 01:17 PM

for you from me??
for me from you??
for us from me??
for you from us??

confused yet??

good. . . this was great. . . I must have missed this the first time. . . I love it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-06-29 02:16 PM

Well done indeed. We see the best in you in your every post

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-06-29 02:22 PM

"I have done all done can do,
I pray you see the best in me."

Always!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

9 posted 2001-06-29 02:37 PM

is ME the same as me
or is ME ME rather than thee?

fine poem
I don't know why there's a blush on the side, and I couldn't find it anyway

[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-29-2001).]

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

10 posted 2001-06-29 03:14 PM

Hear my moan,
  of thing newborn,
     bird that waits
for cue to sing...
  and I have flown
     the skies of free,
tasted moons of mighty mead...

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Weaving words of magic again,

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

11 posted 2001-06-29 09:34 PM

Forgive my abruptness, but a quick thank you to ya all---and Va? You are right...no need for a blush on the side! (Think it's time I lost that...thanks!)

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