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Lisa
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0 posted 2001-06-28 07:46 AM




Little girl,
Little child
Full of youthful
Charms and wiles

Dreaming dreams
Spun of gold
Quicksilver dreams
So hard to hold

Changing, shifting
In rapid flight
Soaring higher
Than a kite

Slowly, softly
Coming down
Your feet firmly
On the ground

Flights of fancy
Elusive and free
Little girl
What do you see?

                      Lisa ‘01


© Copyright 2001 Lisa M. Fisher - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-28 08:28 AM


all three of the poems you posted are very nice I am sure they would be wonderful reaad to a small child...I always admired peole who could write such poems...nice job..
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-06-28 11:20 AM


Simple in its eloquence.  Or is it eloquent in its simplicity?  Either way, well done indeed
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2001-06-28 11:22 AM


Wonderful poem ...so delightfully written!
Voiceless
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Under the stars upon the wind
4 posted 2001-06-28 11:24 AM


Short and Sweet!
Nicely done!

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

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