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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-07-02 01:47 PM

Sparkled sunlit wave
Rippled surface of water
Clouds drift sky blushing
..................

Winging flight of geese
Cloud drift formation on high
Green lily might bloom
.................

Forest now greened
Snowmelt ran cold with small fry
Stones melted with time
.....................

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-07-02 01:50 PM

You have brought down the walls and surrounded me in quiet beauty with these....

thank you....

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-07-02 01:56 PM

Now you've done it! And very well I might add

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-07-02 03:59 PM

Wonderful...and stones melting, sounds beautiful until I take it literally, then it's rather scarey, that would be a rather HOT day. whooooo!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-07-02 04:52 PM

I like these, Nicely written.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-07-02 06:38 PM

ah, it's haiku day is it???

well done with these Sir. . .

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BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

6 posted 2001-07-03 10:17 PM

Can't write 'em but I love 'em.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

7 posted 2001-07-04 12:43 PM

Oh I love your haikus, I think it is the most pure form of poetry.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

8 posted 2001-07-04 12:58 PM

Three beautiful hiaku, Captain!

Cor

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-07-04 01:28 PM

so so beautiful! very soft

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-08-01 01:27 PM

You penned 3 wonderful haikus!

The first one is my favourite~

Melissa~

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2001-09-05 07:12 AM

Beautiful haikus....love them all

Charisma

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