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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Within the depths of my heart, there is a silent echo that wonders, if you loved me. Within the deepness of my soul, there is a quiet question that asks, if I loved you. Within the wall of this love, there is a need to know, if love concealed lust. [This message has been edited by walker (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Good job of writing a saddening question. I hope you find the answer you are seeking |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
heavy question...I hope too it's the answer you seek. |
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Rain Junior Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 21Atlanta, GA |
Powerful writing! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I understand this question, and you have put it forth here in an effectively yearning way. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Can relate to the feelings of uncertainty expressed in this. Well written. Poeminister |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
pondering the question wonderfully |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sad sigh) It sure is a very sad question indeed, for our lust just seems to build up every day in anxious anticipation of true love to come to our hearts, and it become so tight it floods love and then in the end we realize this may not be true love. (sad sigh) I am feeling this way right now, and am trying as hard as I can to stay on my feet and find the right one, the girl that can feel for me and understand me. (sad sigh) I hope you really don't feel this way, for I always read your words of love and you deserve the greatest love you can ever dream of! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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