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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-23 05:18 PM

Two hearts
Two souls
Two spirits
entwined
Two minds
Two bodies
Two separate
lives
Too risky
Too dangerous
Too sinful
this love
Too tempting
Too sensual
Too opportunistic
your touch.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

1 posted 2001-05-23 05:22 PM

Well, who wouln't love you.

Nice poem my friend

Titia

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-05-23 05:30 PM

Enjoyed....too much!

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-05-23 05:51 PM

Too bad...'cause it sounded so good.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-05-23 08:01 PM

the forbidden. . . you show it well here walker. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-23 08:36 PM

two's company and three's a crowd!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

6 posted 2001-05-24 12:23 PM

The Garden of Eden? A keeper for me.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

7 posted 2001-05-24 02:54 AM

Excellently said.

PM

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

8 posted 2001-06-05 01:40 PM

this is just too poetic and i love it

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-06-05 01:59 PM

(sigh) This would be the perfect kind of poem for a wedding reception; two seperate hearts melting together as one! (smiles) You are just so sweet and loving, that special love of yours probably melts after every word you speak from your sweet heart! (smiles) I love it!!! May you always flood each other with cupid arrows! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-06-05 02:03 PM

You have said a lot in few words, walker. Simple yet complex. Very well written.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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