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Forever Awaits - Written With Sven
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Forever Awaits - Written With Sven |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Forever Awaits  Again, a day of life ends and another night begins Another night where he must be away from his angel Her hair of gold and eyes of emerald floating around his mind on clouds of consciousness He sits by the window and becomes hypnotized by the lights of the city the summerwind begins to flow through his body flowing in her soft, crystalline cadence carrying his soul away to meet with her own to answer her passion's prayer He awakens to a light so bright he knows that it cannot be of worldly creation, again, she has called him here... here, across the plains of time here to their love where forever awaits she whispers: Come, enter the gate of soulmates... our time has arrived, the blush of breeze shall take us there to castles of enchantment in the air pegasus of pearl shall lead us to rainbows of luna-graced hue flying, gingerly, just me and you... melody of resounding rapture begins 'neath a sunset of clouds of doves in a magical menagerie 'pon serenity winds Sway so sweetly into my soul surrender to this sensation of epiphany of reverie ever high, in ambrosia azure of sky boarding the tapestry of jubilee and we'll dip our ink into the depths of our dreams within a breath of lips lingering to make love... together we are so entwined in rhapsody for all time... mesh of flesh heart to heart, soul to spirit across the field of forever that is ours 'neath a tiara of velvet mandarin stars Come, heart, oh, heart we'll dance the devine of destiny o'er a canvas of ruffled ocean waves of silk to the drums of sapphire percussion swirl of passion lit by a moon of smiling milk Come, hold tight in this eden of ecstasy as heaven of heartbeats flow into one, the valley for romance is set for our masterpiece of bond abiding to this pre-fated duet and wings shall carry us to bliss lifting to lullabies of twilight there is no love greater than this as you caress a kiss of tenderness upon my hand stirring the fantasies of fantasia safe within Cupid's promised land Come...before the dawn awakes and we'll sail on the sparkle of our eyes paradise beckons, my dear, I am yours, as you are mine, love so lush, eternal in time breathing a hush into the air to take us there Come now, kindred one... forever awaits He reaches for her heart with his own and, as one, they enter the gates this is the end of his soul's journey through the realms of astral being no longer will he seek that one soul that matches his own For, he has finally heard and allowed the love that has sought him for so long to enter his body like air flowing through a luminescent sky filled with depths of love and planes of passion that only a heart of two, joined as one could ascend to that dizzying height And, as he looks back at the antiquity of his being he knows that this is where he belongs here, with his astral counterpart his soulmate the one whom he was created for this is where he belongs here where forever awaits  By Sven and Melissa Honeybee [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-28-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa & Sven AMEN. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
W O W! Just....W O W! You two have done ... Good! jwesley |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I love it. You both are superb. A love that goes beyond the fifth dimension. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow Melissa. . . this is wonderful. . . you've really outdone yourself here. . . I love the way that it looks, sounds, and reads. . . your words are just excellent. . . Thank you for the honor to write with you my friend. . . I really enjoyed it. . .  --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You know what you have when two poets collide? STARS! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
excellent write and melding.. enjoyed a great deal... very nice indeed. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* what a duet....what a words of art you two painted here...superb Charisma |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Have I said WOW yet?  This is truly amazing. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Big thank you's to everyone for their generous replies! ~And Sven, it was an honour for me to write with the king of all romantics! Your beginning and ending to my words are awesome~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Loving this in every way! Great combination, Sven and Melissa. Very beautiful story. Sandra |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
And, as he looks back at the antiquity of his being he knows that this is where he belongs here, with his astral counterpart his soulmate the one whom he was created for this is where he belongs here where forever awaits ====================== This is absolutely wonderful........but that what should be expected when two lovely poets collide...... I have always been touched at the idea of (soulmates) and you have put it wonderfully......and with the picture and Yanni's music....this must be wonderful. Bravo...  Thank you both...... *************************** It's only me.......only me I hope that would suffice eternally {{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}} [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 06-28-2001).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Totally beautiful! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was absolutely so beautiful and such a superb collaboration, hard to tell where one left off and the other started and that is perfection! Congratulations. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! That's really good! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa & Sven~ A very pretty read. Nice to see poets joined in penning of thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
more thank you's to those that have replied. . . your comments are appreciated!!! ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Bravo to you both! Excellent collaboration and wonderful blrend of two fine tslents. i enjoyed this tremendously.  Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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