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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-06-27 09:44 PM



Forever Awaits

Again, a day of life ends and
another night begins
Another night where he must be
away from his angel
Her hair of gold and eyes of emerald
floating around his mind
on clouds of consciousness

He sits by the window and becomes hypnotized
by the lights of the city
the summerwind begins to flow
through his body
flowing in her soft, crystalline cadence
carrying his soul away
to meet with her own
to answer her passion's prayer

He awakens to a light so bright
he knows that it
cannot be of worldly creation,
again, she has called him here...
here, across the plains of time
here to their love
where forever awaits
she whispers:


Come, enter the gate of soulmates...
our time has arrived,
the blush of breeze shall take us there
to castles of enchantment in the air
pegasus of pearl shall lead us to rainbows
of luna-graced hue
flying, gingerly, just me and you...
melody of resounding rapture begins
'neath a sunset of clouds of doves
in a magical menagerie 'pon serenity winds

Sway so sweetly into my soul
surrender to this sensation
of epiphany of reverie
ever high, in ambrosia azure of sky
boarding the tapestry of jubilee
and we'll dip our ink into the depths of our dreams
within a breath of lips lingering to make love...
together we are so entwined
in rhapsody for all time...
mesh of flesh
heart to heart,
soul to spirit
across the field of forever that is ours
'neath a tiara of velvet mandarin stars

Come, heart, oh, heart
we'll dance the devine of destiny
o'er a canvas of ruffled ocean waves of silk
to the drums of sapphire percussion swirl of passion
lit by a moon of smiling milk

Come, hold tight in this eden of ecstasy
as heaven of heartbeats flow into one,
the valley for romance is set
for our masterpiece of bond
abiding to this pre-fated duet
and wings shall carry us to bliss
lifting to lullabies of twilight
there is no love greater than this
as you caress a kiss of tenderness upon my hand
stirring the fantasies of fantasia
safe within Cupid's promised land

Come...before the dawn awakes
and we'll sail on the sparkle of our eyes
paradise beckons, my dear,
I am yours, as you are mine,
love so lush,
eternal in time
breathing a hush into the air to take us there

Come now, kindred one...
forever awaits


He reaches for her heart with his own
and, as one, they enter the gates
this is the end of his soul's journey
through the realms of astral being
no longer will he seek that
one soul that matches his own

For, he has finally heard and allowed
the love that has sought him for so long
to enter his body
like air flowing through
a luminescent sky filled with
depths of love
and planes of passion
that only a heart of two, joined as one
could ascend to that dizzying height

And, as he looks back at the
antiquity of his being
he knows that this is where
he belongs
here, with his astral counterpart
his soulmate
the one whom he was created for

this is where he belongs
here
where
forever awaits

          By Sven and Melissa Honeybee         


[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-28-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-06-27 10:13 PM


Melissa & Sven
AMEN.

jwesley
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2 posted 2001-06-27 10:17 PM


W O W!  Just....W O W! You two have done ... Good!

jwesley

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3 posted 2001-06-27 10:59 PM


I love it. You both are superb. A love that goes beyond the fifth dimension.
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4 posted 2001-06-28 01:26 PM


wow Melissa. . . this is wonderful. . . you've really outdone yourself here. . . I love the way that it looks, sounds, and reads. . . your words are just excellent. . .

Thank you for the honor to write with you my friend. . . I really enjoyed it. . .  

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5 posted 2001-06-28 01:37 PM


You know what you have when two poets collide?

STARS!

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6 posted 2001-06-28 01:41 PM


excellent write and melding.. enjoyed a great deal... very nice indeed.


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7 posted 2001-06-28 06:24 PM


*WOW* what a duet....what a words of art you two painted here...superb

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8 posted 2001-06-28 07:25 PM


Have I said WOW yet?   This is truly amazing.  

Honeybee
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9 posted 2001-06-28 08:16 PM



Big thank you's to everyone for their generous replies!  

~And Sven, it was an honour for me to write with the king of all romantics!  Your beginning and ending to my words are awesome~

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10 posted 2001-06-28 09:26 PM


Oh Loving this in every way! Great combination, Sven and Melissa. Very beautiful story.
Sandra

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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
11 posted 2001-06-28 10:42 PM




And, as he looks back at the
antiquity of his being
he knows that this is where
he belongs
here, with his astral counterpart
his soulmate
the one whom he was created for

this is where he belongs
here
where
forever awaits
======================

This is absolutely wonderful........but that what should be expected when two lovely poets collide......

I have always been touched at the idea of (soulmates) and you have put it wonderfully......and with the picture and Yanni's music....this must be wonderful.

Bravo...

Thank you both......
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It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

[This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 06-28-2001).]

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12 posted 2001-06-28 11:12 PM


Totally beautiful!
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13 posted 2001-06-29 02:27 AM


This was absolutely so beautiful and such a superb collaboration, hard to tell where one left off and the other started and that is perfection! Congratulations.

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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14 posted 2001-06-29 07:32 AM


Wow! That's really good!
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15 posted 2001-06-29 09:48 PM


Melissa & Sven~
A very pretty read.
Nice to see poets joined in penning of thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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16 posted 2001-06-30 10:32 AM


more thank you's to those that have replied. . . your comments are appreciated!!!



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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17 posted 2001-06-30 10:41 AM


Bravo  to you both! Excellent collaboration and wonderful blrend of two fine tslents. i enjoyed this tremendously.

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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