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. . . Seduction completed . . . Tanka |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The lure and allure Baited by beautiful vamp Enticed and entrapped Lo, Inveigled and tempted My seduction is complete. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
And you call me a rascal??? Enjoyed... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and then, you have to give in. . .  well done my friend, this was an excellent tanka. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ron ~ It takes one to know one  Sven ~ I have surrendered, unconditionally ... almost. Thanx |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
if you only knew seduction.....from me....to you dreams made to come true all the things that I could do shall I start with.....peek~a~boo~? ( sorry, just having fun)  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ Peek - a - boo Too bad we can't have fun without having to feel guilty and apologize. I enjoy your comments and the interplay we enjoy while writing them to each other while 1500 miles apart. But our hearts are friends and next door neighbors [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, you are a dear friend to me you are so fun.....thanks for always playing |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yanno what? I say write away, I would love to see you play! This was great, and Sea, you monkey, yours was great too. Go for it, only millions of people watching (no pressure there right?) He he "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ In peek-a-boo hearts Through seek-a-boo of the mind Verse joins hand with rhyme Passionless passion Coursing through the pages blue Seduction complete *Love the inspiration !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ Mayhap we should just let the "juices slow" and respond as we feel the urge (no pun intended) Mysteria ~ Hey, wonderful lady, maybe we'll do that if you join in ... you know, safety in numbers, eh what! Marge ~ Hmmmmm. Passionless passion? I dunno if I can accomplish that. When I write something with passion it is very real in my imagination, even if the target of that passion is not actually the person to whom I am responding. Did any of that make sense? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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