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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
advancement of soul striding to stand within and come up to your space, then encapsulated by your address surveying your chest rise fall perceiving this self’s soul in your judgment grasping the eventuality of sooner so, I, in stepping up to the kiss found then my shy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame, Why not. Enjoyed |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sy, why not, indeed! So very glad this caught your eye....thank you my sweet poet... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Inside each sighfully resigned moment wondering why Loved you poem... as usual it made me think and re-read for the nuances and things not shouted... but left to lie like smoke on a still evening... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Another great write! Why not? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and after that??  wonderful my friend. . . you have such a way of looking at the world. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Nicely done! "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I like the way this flowed....a good write!! Nathan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
encapsulated by your address surveying your chest rise fall perceiving this self’s soul in your judgment grasping the eventuality of sooner so, I, in stepping up to the kiss found then my shy ========================= OH i do so love the imagery in this one... very nice poetess Deca!! I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Captain...your comments are certainly a poem unto themselves, thank you... Ethome...why not indeed?....thank you... Sven! After that....who knows? Thank you Mysteria.... Nate, I liked it too...thank you!.... JanetMarie, the imagery was just for you....Thank you.... |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Never know till you try  Might as well! If nothing else it'll be a rush!! lol And I love those Nice jobStrive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The soul does bring us to interesting developments, does it not?..Very interesting write there, Decaflame...very gentle smile |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
when shy found again both souls have become enriched it looks good on them |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
ThUnDeRkYsS....thank you so much for coming in to read... Logan, yes, Sir, the soul does wonderful and then some amazing things...if we listen... Interloper: in smiles wonderment never ceasing to delight advancement's encroach |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
This is much too good not to be at the top  Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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