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The hidden valley
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The hidden valley |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Within the bosom of this land In valley blessed with peaceful time The hills of green reach for the sky While earth and nature join to rhyme The vision speaks in voice of calm Body slows to rest in peace Nothing seen to threat or harm The scape, a brilliant masterpiece A valley hidden from the world Where peace and love come home A place where one can happy be Where one might seek some time alone To be at one with nature To search within the soul To contemplate the facts of life To set ones sights upon a goal |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is very pleasant, and peaceful. Thank you for taking time to share this with all of us... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
To be at one with nature To search within the soul To contemplate the facts of life To set ones sights upon a goal =============== This can, ans should, be done anywhere ... but your valley would be an especially good place. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely, lovely...a peaceful hidden valley good gentle rhythm to this one |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very peaceful and comforting, thank you. Corinne |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
A beautiful poem and so descriptive. I have just had a trip through such a valley and really relate to your words. Betty Lou Hebert |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A beautiful flowing and peaceful poem! A warm inviting read! |
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