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The Dream Pool
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The Dream Pool |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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The Dream Pool across the water dance your coin thoughts and dreams now can join make a wish throw your penny there are dreams they flow plenty dreams are real they can come true if you follow them with pursue you now stand by the dream pool make these dreams your true tool don't close your eyes look as you throw watch this gift dreams bestow "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This poem is full of hope and faith....very pleasant writing! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, yes, to dream... very ethereal, you are 1slick lady |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I like all of this, Lady....from the plunk of the coin, to the dream of the pool.... well done! |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
It would be nice if we could spend our time with our eyes closed dreaming. Nice. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've always found that it's better to dream with your eyes open. . .  wonderful helen. . . you always have such a gentle, dream-like quality to your work. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wisht I had one o' them "dream pools." I stayed awake all night to watch my dreams and saw nary a one  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ I like this - 'across the water dance your coin' Nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, and what is more important than our dreams. Very nicely said..gentle smile |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
I echo Marge's sentiments and others. Beautiful! ^_^ --Artistic-- "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
don't close your eyes look as you throw Dreams are precious...not to be wasted on a careless toss. Yep! |
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