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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-06-26 10:33 PM


This night is made for romance
So much love is in the air
My gaze moves in your direction
As I catch sight of your amorous stare

Your eyes they see right through me
There is no need for us to speak
My love for you can only be measured
By the highest mountain peak

The most vivid colors of the rainbow
Are so very symbolic of you
With you I fly above the crowd
And look down to admire the view

To you I so easily surrender
As I lose myself in the pools of your eyes
We'll scale new heights of passion
As each day holds a new surprise

With you right here beside me
My feet rarely touch the ground
How very blessed am I
For this love that I have found

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Fancy
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1 posted 2001-06-27 02:24 AM


...a lovely expression of love...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

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2 posted 2001-06-27 03:49 AM


Now that was a lovely love poem, enjoyed!

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

Dee
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3 posted 2001-06-27 06:08 AM


Beautifully written Sue. Love like this is worth writing about.
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

ethome
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4 posted 2001-06-27 06:48 AM


Very romantic and full of emotional warmth!
Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2001-06-27 07:17 AM


This is just lovely Suetang ... beautiful sentiments. I really enjoyed this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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6 posted 2001-06-27 09:42 AM


lovely expression of love...very uplifting...

enjoyed!!

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7 posted 2001-06-27 10:34 AM


What a gr8 place to be lost
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8 posted 2001-06-27 10:48 AM


....very nice....
Suetang
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9 posted 2001-06-27 06:16 PM


Thanks to everyone for your lovely comments and I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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