And You Whisper My Name

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2001-06-26 05:49 PM

You hide in the darkness,
And there you remain.
You follow my footsteps,
And whisper my name.

You linger behind me
A reminder, a refrain,
Singing dark nothings
And you whisper my name.

You mock my sadness,
Mirror my pain,
You are my dark side.
Blocking wholeness again.

Surviving without substance,
Burning without fire,
You’re memories of truth,
I can’t call you a liar.

You chase without running,
And just follow my lead,
You’re always behind me,
On my sorrow you feed.

I know you’ll not leave me,
You’re there 'til I die,
Reflections of the past,
In mind’s eye make me cry.

I run, but can’t hide,
You reflect all my shame.
You echo dark memories,
And you whisper my name.

~ o0o ~

art: Steve Hanks "To Search Within"

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-06-26 05:52 PM

Very nice Mysteria...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-06-26 05:53 PM

Goodness....sounds like Depression knows where this one lives....

a very good, dark write, this....well done.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-06-26 06:06 PM

know this well.....wonderfully done Mysteria.....

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2001-06-26 06:24 PM

You linger behind me
A reminder, a refrain,
Singing dark nothings
And you whisper my name.

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I'm truly overwhelmed by this.....

A soft whispering and so blue.....
It's true........in so many ways, it's true.

Thank you dear ~Mysteria~ for this.....it has made me feel a deepr hue of blue......

**********************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

5 posted 2001-06-26 06:34 PM

Got to me bones it did

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-06-26 08:01 PM

Yes, even I know this relentless torment, as always you express yourself well!~

Take care,
Melissa~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-06-26 09:10 PM

Mysteria~
Deeply felt~
Your versatility is amazing ...
Wonderfully portrayed.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2001-06-26 09:14 PM

Very wonderfully done, my friend. Agree with Marge.

jwesley

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2001-06-26 10:27 PM

I want to thank you all for reading this one about depression. It is about a part of many people's lives, and I wanted to show the battle they face each day fighting a demon that is hard to destroy without help. However with help and time, it can

Thank you again.

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-06-27 03:43 AM

Sharon-
   very deep emotions here.
   this is a great write...
   me likes it.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2001-06-27 07:34 AM

Like Nat King Cole sang....

"The ghost of you clings
these foolish things
remind me of you"

Well written poem on the the reflections of the past...the ones that cling!
Love that picture!....can I get her phone #?

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2001-06-27 09:14 PM

Valerie: Thank you.

Ethome: You behave! Don't have her phone number but I suggest you check any local gym? Thanks for the lyrics of my all time favorite singer, and thanks for reading this.

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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