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Perfect Contradiction |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Wrap me in cerulean waves and wash me back to shore or if you please, cast me adrift as has been done before. Dreams ridden roughly out to sea seem true unreachable still azure waters comfort me my spirit savable. Resign unto the higher strength the ocean knows me best what's meant to be will surely come the answer to my quest. Epilogue (Titanic lifeboat up ahead will she attain before hearts' dead?) |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
It's good to see you posting, Cat.... enjoyed! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, lil sis... the waves of life will set you adrift in the direction meant for your quest! A perfect voyage here.....loved it.....  The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Contemplative and thought-provoking. Speaking of quests... (my next post: "THE NEW WORLD OF YOUR HEART". Check it out...) -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Wrap me in cerulean waves and wash me back to shore or if you please, cast me adrift as has been done before. Dreams ridden roughly out to sea seem true unreachable still azure waters comfort me my spirit savable ==================== love the cadence and imagery in this sandra...and the bittersweet longing. love the added couplet at the end... we have to hold on to the hope and dream that our "Jack" will be in that lifeboat. well done poetess CM I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is really quite a fine piece. I do especially like the first stanza. The flow is wonderful, befitting the theme, I think  Such a peaceful decision for one t make, to allow Him to take one where s/he is to go to be and do their given quest. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
contradiction indeed. . . wonderful Sandra. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sandra, you know dolphins have been known to keep sinking sailors afloat and to shore..gentle smile |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, my friend, the waves will always welcome you back, and my hand will ever be out if you care to come ashore...We ebb and flow with the tides and like them ride the waves thought they be emotional ones.... Beautiful write... jwesley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thank you, all who read and take time to write. I appreciate it so much. Sometimes you are like my lifeline, keeping me from being pulled under. Love to all Sandra |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
nice. real nice. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
really enjoyed this Sandra, some great images Wrap me in cerulean waves and wash me back to shore or if you please, cast me adrift as has been done before. |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Loved it Cat...  What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, As always, a masterpiece! Love, Elise |
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autumn Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 44Maine |
enjoyed |
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