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Rick
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0 posted 2001-06-26 08:32 AM


About a friend with terminal cancer, just thoughts and words that I would like to share.
Just day-to-day is all I see, through pain that’s inner deep
Security of life has left and nightmares fill my sleep
Was just a short small time ago when health of never thought
Now I find that what I’ve lost, with money can’t be bought

I feel the depths of sorrow for self and all I love
And understand not why God calls and wants me there above
I feel depressed and helpless, unable to attain
Why I carry burdens load and yet cannot remain

To mornings now I waken, though bright they seem so dim
I try to smile but sadness and pain again come in
My family carry burden, I know their hidden fear
Will I last another month or even just a year?

I feel deprived, forgotten, by God and futures bliss
The years I’ve had don’t feel enough, already much I miss
My family and their little ways, the troubles that they share
All that just might happen, in time when I’m not there

Everyday I pray now and hope with hopes own will
That fate will give another chance, the killer in me kill
That I will see a lot more years with all my family near
That I will see the future come with those that I hold dear


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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-06-26 08:56 AM


"I feel deprived, forgotten, by God and futures bliss
The years I’ve had don’t feel enough, already much I miss"

You have captured so many of the heart-wrenching thoughts that dwell in these difficult situations, beautifully written Rick ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

RSWells
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2 posted 2001-06-26 08:57 AM


I'll pray with you.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

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3 posted 2001-06-26 10:23 AM


That is when we have to place ourselves in God's hands....

well done, Rick....

Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-06-26 04:53 PM


Came right on  down to me

sweet sweet poem

Titia

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