Open Poetry #14 |
Cell Phone Dilemma (a modern fable) |
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Driving along Drink in one hand Cell phone in the other Rushing around Kids to pick up For dinner with his mother Soccer game Over at six The kids jump in the rear One misdial One missed sip It's an accident I fear The law you say Diminishes you In freedom for your right But is it worth The 'death of you' Not seeing that last red light. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I have actually screamed out the window...."get off the freakin phone!!" People with those things glued to their head are bizzare creatures........ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hey now... some of us can walk and chew gum at the same time! :-} But you do have a point regarding many people out there. Nicely written and an important message to think about. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I wrote this because the just passed a law in New York that makes it illegal to drive and use a cell phone at the same time. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good message, Sharon. Though many people can handle this, I'm afraid many can't. Even the radio/tape /CD player seems to be a challenge for some drivers. I have seen people go off the road just fiddling with it. I wish everyone would work toward more concious and careful driving, as far to many people are getting hurt. Thanks for this. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
good for New York. . . now we just need it in the rest of the country. . . seeing those people just makes me cringe. . . great job. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Reminds me of me I drive a stick, with a cigarette (yes i smoke) in the left hand, the gear on the right hand, and the wheel directed by my leg. While I got the phone pinned by my shoulder so it doesn't fall off. And I pimp drive too (ya know, the laid back driving) hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare [This message has been edited by acire (edited 06-28-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Acies...my whole image of you has just been blown out of the water! |
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