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Today...I Did Not Cry
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Today...I Did Not Cry |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I don't feel like working today and that's the honest truth, I feel like a little child stuck somewhere in my youth. I think the sun is shining brighter and the skies seem a little more blue, I don't know if they really are or if it's just because of you. I can not describe this feeling nor can I explain the reasons why, but I thank the Lord above because today....I did not cry. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely said..and it is too bad we have to work...on days we would rather be the child we were... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is lovely! Too often we ignore the child in us.... sometimes, we should listen.... with imagining.... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Very, very sweet words you wrote there. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
..."or if it's just because of you"!!!! How many times I have had these same feelings...wanting to run, laugh, play and jump higher than ever before...amazing the influence other's have on our lives!!! Fancy |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
my dear aunt, this was awesome. i truly loved it.   if love wants me, then it can come find me |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I don't feel like working today that's the honestly said, I feel the weight of age at play and I’d rather be back in bed. Sometimes it’s hard to continue, Does someone give you an April Sky, To brighten the things you must do, I hope there a no days where you cry. No tears fell from you today, Is there cloud break in your sorrow, May the tears forever go away. Perhaps there will be none tomorrow. Gloom |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I agree with Lady. I try to keep in touch with the child in me, try not to forget that the skies really did seem more blue in childhood. Nice work!  Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I hope today, and the next...are just as nice. Well done. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I really like this poem. *S* When we've been sad for a long time, freedom from that sadness produces weightlessness and euphoria... no one should have to work under such circumstances! *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 06-26-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey Donna, want to go on the swings with me??  great job my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Donna...... Such a gentle spirit you have.......and such a lovely poem....... Thank you ************************ It's only me.......only me |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The little child in us, is what keeps us alive..gentle smile, nicely done and a welcome read |
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