Anticipating............ Rain..................

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SEA

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0 posted 2001-06-25 09:51 PM

Anticipating the rain
This fire burns within
Nerves taught with want
Electricity in the air
That crisp burning sensation
Before……….
Being saturated
Consumed by each drop
Methodically falling
Knowing exactly where to land
Upon bare skin
Gleaning glistening
Creating sheen
Following flow
Calming with such force ~
Soothing this raw need
Yet never smothering
What burns within…………….

~SEA~

Sunshine

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1 posted 2001-06-25 10:11 PM

Whew.....'nuff said....

Balladeer

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2 posted 2001-06-25 10:24 PM

it'll take more than rain to put out that fire, SEA!

Poet deVine

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3 posted 2001-06-25 11:16 PM

Send some my way!!!

bslicker

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4 posted 2001-06-25 11:20 PM

Calling the fire department right now....
this fire needs more than rain.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 06-25-2001).]

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-06-25 11:29 PM

IN RHYTHM WITH THE RAIN ... WHOOOOWOOO

very cool write me raindancer girlie...
this is sensual and aching at the same time of being serene..
love the longing in this...
The Rain is for sure one of your sweetest muses.

I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep.
I'm in too far, I'm in way too deep over you.
You'll always be the one.
You were the first, you'll be the last.

RMW
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6 posted 2001-06-26 08:54 AM

SEA ..... With this you've moved Passions into the fire season. Nicely done. Bob

Kit McCallum

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7 posted 2001-06-26 08:57 AM

Powerful writing Susan, and wonderful imagery ... beautifully written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

RSWells
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8 posted 2001-06-26 08:59 AM

Drizzle with sizzle.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

SEA

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with you

9 posted 2001-06-26 10:06 AM

Sunshine~

thank you

Balladeer~ I think so too

Poet~ if I could I would......

Bernie~ ah yes, but the rain will do for now....

Janet~ thank you, the rain definately is.....

RMW~ thank you

Kit~ thank you for that!

RSWells~ yes....LOL....

thank you

~SEA

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Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-06-26 11:51 AM

I'll bet you keep the Forest Rangers on their toes

ForwardSearching
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11 posted 2001-06-26 11:53 AM

Nicely done as always!!!

Sudhir Iyer
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12 posted 2001-06-26 12:00 PM

the fire of anticipation...

the sizzling wait...

great work...

regards,
sudhir

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Auguste

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By the sea

13 posted 2001-06-26 02:08 PM

Susan,

I don't think what burns within could ever be smothered.

This is such a pretty write.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

bslicker

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14 posted 2001-06-26 02:10 PM

your right Sea, really don't want the fire to go out that quick anyways,,, not this one anyways.....
let the rain put it out slowly....

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

SEA

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15 posted 2001-06-26 02:59 PM

Interloper~ na.......

just the hubby

FS~ thank you!

Sudhir lyer~ thanks!

Michael~ honestly...I don't either, the rain only makes the fire hotter

thank you

Bernie~

the rain is the fire......

~SEA

bslicker

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16 posted 2001-06-26 03:04 PM

i know

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

SEA

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17 posted 2001-06-26 03:08 PM

LOL

Marge Tindal

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18 posted 2001-06-26 05:15 PM

SEA~
You do the rain ... so lovingly~
Love it !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Logan
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19 posted 2001-06-26 08:55 PM

WOW!! SEA, what a wonderful read..gentle smile

Lone Wolf
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20 posted 2001-06-26 08:56 PM

Oh yeah!!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

jwesley
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Spring, Texas

21 posted 2001-06-26 09:03 PM

Gee, I wrote a poem about rain once...from the otherside of love....nothing like this.
A pleasure to read dear Sea.

jwesley

Irish Rose
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22 posted 2001-06-26 09:17 PM

this is sizzlin'!!!

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

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