Open Poetry #14 |
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When Your Heart Is Mine |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion ![]() |
When Your Heart is Mine Into your inner works I travel, an intrepid journey beyond id, past superficial mechanics I slide, through layers of tissue, skin. There are no secrets in your keep, advancing upon your heart, each element I will expose, each ventricle, mine to chart. I love your familiar cadence, with its slight skip now and then, yes, an alluring sound, this tidal rush where all walls resound. What am I to do with your fate, held in greedy hands? There is only one thing to do, relinquish all power; simply, I will love you. © 2001 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 06-25-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
And what else can we do, but do in the sake of love. gentle smile, very nice Cor, hon |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Sweet surrender. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Corinne Such wonderful words you weaved with this beautiful piece............Sue Suetang |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Logan, RSWells and Suetang. Corinne |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Nothing complicated about love sometimes.... lovely Corinne! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Corinne ....The quiet rhythm of a trusting heart. Lovely. Bob |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and that should be it shouldn't it??? great job with this one Corinne. . . it's got a quiet and gentle quality that flows on the page. . .and touches the heart. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne--I always enjoy reading your poetry..in this one is no exception...you answer your own question with the perfect answer. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
When you heart is mine....... *sigh*........quite lovely.......I really loved it so much. Thank you ************************** It's only me.......only me |
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