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My Lord
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My Lord |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
My Lord As a young lady I stood before you and took a vow To satisfy your every craving Even tho I didn't know how My Lord Now many moons later I stand before you and pledge As a women A life filled with passion filled excitement My Lord Alone in our quarters Full of emotion, feeling pure devotion Transparent and equal Yet captive of your magnetism I crave your contact I crave your stroke My Lord Here I am And I submit, to the interconnection we share Our appetites in perfect ballance from our thoughts, to the way we share our bodies with forethought and care My Lord Forge the path And I shall follow For you alone have possessorship Of my very being Thank You |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Zinsser, how beautiful and wonderful total commitment to your faith. May you be blessed. ME |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
What a lovely pledge of commitment. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Connie...Glad I clicked on this before having to rush out the door. This is very interesting. You see, I know this nun.....Again, this is a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing. Bob |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I could be completely wrong, but something tells me, Connie, that there's a deeper current to this poem than just the "Lord"...? A serene painting, in either case. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Thank You All for responding... I've been away so I was unable until today to see .... As Always A Great Honor Mark LOL well ya think LOL Thank You |
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