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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-05-23 04:59 PM

Gently
give me your love
I want slow hands on me
sweet romance for my soul tonight
patient kisses in all the right places
with no thought given to the clock
just this heat between us
give me your love
gently

~SEA~

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-23 05:04 PM

all
you want is
him

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-05-23 05:06 PM

Wow, couln't do that even if I wanted to.
Very nice.

Titia

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-05-23 05:10 PM

Oh yes...slow..gentle..you've captured a need well.

I like this.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-05-23 05:16 PM

all I want is him.....yes.....

yes you could

thank you

~SEA

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-23 06:51 PM

whoo hoo who needs a clock

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-05-23 06:58 PM

exactly

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-05-23 07:10 PM

WHOO HOO...
hey girlie...call hubby and read this to him on the phone...
I'll bet he'll be home early ...

bet he'll break the sound barrier on the free way *L*
very cool/hottie write...
in the format that suits you so well

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-05-23 07:46 PM

Sweet Janet...you always make me smile....he has to work late tonight...but I'll wait up

LOL thank you

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

9 posted 2001-05-23 08:48 PM

SEA,
Lovely romantic thoughts penned. Nicely done.

Poeminister

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

10 posted 2001-05-23 10:01 PM

I like this. It is warm in all the right places. I would unplug the clock if it were me

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2001-05-23 10:15 PM

PM~

thank you so much

Alan~ thank you

~SEA

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

12 posted 2001-05-24 12:57 PM

I love how you painted the picture - who could resist.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2001-05-24 02:30 AM

SEA~
Girl ... you've got just enough hands on your time !

You do these really well, sweetie !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Qumar Fatthi
Member

since 2001-05-20

Posts 59
Pakistan

14 posted 2001-05-24 02:37 AM

Oh SEA ... you know I am already ready for giving my love to you...

"sweet romance for my soul tonight"
is very Excellent...

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

15 posted 2001-05-24 02:40 AM

Oh sorry from the other user name....
Oh SEA ... you know I am already ready for giving my love to you...

"sweet romance for my soul tonight"
is very Excellent...

Qumar Fatthi
Member

since 2001-05-20

Posts 59
Pakistan

16 posted 2001-05-24 04:29 AM

"sweet romance for my soul tonight
patient kisses in all the right places"

nice work with two beautiful sentences
if u donot mind i want to "i love u"
lololo

Qumar Fatthi

Snowdwen
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

17 posted 2001-05-24 05:02 AM

Nice pome.. well said.. I enjoy your work.. You say things so diffrent.. its like every time I read one of your pomes I can see what you feel.

"You live you learn and life moves on"

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

18 posted 2001-05-24 08:39 AM

Whew!!! Seems I have missed a great deal

A Passionate verse indeed

~ Ruth
www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html

Morgoth
Junior Member

since 2001-05-21

Posts 26
Baltimore, MD

19 posted 2001-05-24 09:41 AM

Wow...you pen such a passionate piece.
What a lucky man. Wait...
I just had an idea
I'll post it in a bit

"I know someday you'll have a beautiful life
I know you'll be a sun
In somebody else's sky
But why...why...why
Can't it be...can't it be mine..."

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

20 posted 2001-06-05 08:10 PM

truely loved this one SEA :bouncing:

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

21 posted 2001-06-06 07:49 AM

Time does stop at least for me, very romantic!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

22 posted 2001-06-06 08:42 AM

Circe love, this is really wonderful and full of passion. Absolutely beautiful writing and presented in a perfect format. You do these supremely well, well done love
Take care
love as always
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

23 posted 2001-06-06 11:08 AM

now Sea I must admit I don't know what a ritameter is but I am going to find out!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

24 posted 2001-06-07 09:34 PM

like this one SEA

just skippin thru all the stuff i miss (on the back pages!) these days...

hugs, g

the boy said, my name's johnny
and it might be a sin
but i'll take your bet
you're gonna regret
i'm the best there's ever been!
-cdaniels

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