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Open Poetry #14

Guessed

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

0 posted 2001-06-07 03:44 PM

Guessed she perched atop a flower,
gleaming yellow, pronounced upright;

Strain hit,
waned her sit,
disappearing through a blink from site;

Sure she landed on that petal,
pity eyes, they clog with metal;

Unable to follow skip.
Fairy princess, flight to quick;

Glance the garden,
blue sky above,
darting breezes passion chills,
flown , left lost,
she has taken love.
Refound searching bush clad hills.
Drops the feeling when had enough,
caught ,         Lsten to Recording

[This message has been edited by thecraig (edited 06-08-2001).]

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

1 posted 2001-06-07 03:49 PM

Nice job!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

2 posted 2001-06-07 09:45 PM

i enjoyed this very much

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