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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-05-23 04:42 PM

I woke this morning to birds
Speaking my name
In a mood I can’t quite describe
Yet borders on shame
All there was and
All there ever will be
In the most peaceful quiet,
These things come to me
Light slowly creeping
Birds softly speaking
My name, over and over
Like a repetitive chant
My mind plays tricks
Like some twisted sycophant
Out of the darkness peers
The solar eye
Parting the gloom
Of the night-time sky
From its sight there
Is no escape
For its sacrifice there’s
No time to waste
What a picture painted
Here in my private world
At peace with myself
And holding on to this girl,
Wishing to never end,
Must be dreaming again

(Typos)

[This message has been edited by PoeticKnight (edited 05-23-2001).]

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-23 04:48 PM

This is a dream that one could get wrapped up in, enough so to draw the shades....

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-23 04:48 PM

I like the birds saying your name....that's so pretty.....I liked this very much

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-05-23 04:50 PM

At least it was a beautiful dream...enjoyed!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-05-23 08:09 PM

dreams come true my friend. . .

I know. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-05-23 08:20 PM

This is beautiful, well done!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-05-23 08:31 PM

the birds don't lie!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2001-05-24 01:32 PM

lovely poetic knight...and no i wont rip your poem apart haa...i like it the way it is..

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-05-24 05:26 PM

enjoy

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

9 posted 2001-05-24 07:24 PM

'The solar eye
Parting the gloom
Of the night-time sky
From its sight there
Is no escape'

Excellent write, PK...fantastic images! I love this!

sp

everytime I close my eyes,
I see your face,
I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize
that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

10 posted 2001-05-24 07:44 PM

You're dreaming wonderfull things, just keep dreaming

Titia

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