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Open Poetry #14

Dreams She Said v5

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-06-25 05:23 AM

“What dreams did you dream last night?”

All in flames,
Looks like I’ve found Dante’s home,
Yellow red,
All are dead,
Tormenting through skin and bone;
No water,
No order,
All is consumed in chaos,
All the flames.

Wooden hallways burning hot,
All have left just I’m forgot,
Knowing that now all is lost.

Then dreams crash into waking
Moments before day breaking.

Gloom

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-06-25 06:28 AM

You write somber, but I can so relate. The sun is just coming up here--and yanno, I somehow wish it wouldn't. Thanks for saying it for me.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-06-25 11:15 AM

Your dream is one I have had.
Thank goodness for the morning light.

"All have left just I’m forgot,
Knowing that now all is lost."

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-06-26 12:41 PM

Well that was a visit to some place I care not to go! Such wonderful writing of a dream.

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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