Open Poetry #14 |
slap-happy ...for doreen :) |
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
i'm writing this poem down here on the floor 'cuz i'm laughing so hard i can't stand it there's silliness running through passions tonight and it seems our doreen is the bandit she's posting...unposting... and writing in riddle to mess with our minds is her mission her slap-happy antics have doubled me over to be able to breathe's what i'm wishin' ~vlraynes ROFLMAO @ you doreen!!! thanks for the laughs! "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-24-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
there aint nuttin better than an irish setter The End |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i made you laugh? how dare I do it!! gaffaw? a grin? how did i do it?? you're KIDDING me!! i made you chuckle? well sue me then with fist and knuckle... please slam me up against the wall!! i made you LAUGH??? I don't recall!!! how did i do that? please, pray tell.... i made you LAUGH??? well, what the hell i hope to make you smile again if not, oh well, i just can't win perhaps if i am lucky, then, i'll laugh myself, and start again and as the grins come into view, i'lll laugh at me, if you laugh at you!!! hehehehehehehehe *wink* thanks, my friend!! [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 06-24-2001).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
ROTFLMAO!!! K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky AND Doreen~ You both QUACK me up ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I just LOVE fun!!! And you gals are bringin' it up, firin' it fine with a comedy line! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
walt- lol...great poetic response! thanks for reading.. doreen, my slap-happy friend- laughing at both of us here..lol. thanks for the fun response.. hugs to you.. Severn- glad you got a laugh out of this.. thanks for reading.. Marge- sometimes i QUACK myself up! lol glad you're laughing with us.. VAS- thanks for joining in on our silliness.. glad you enjoyed.. hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i just wanted to say that marge's reponse was really ducky! at least it's billed that way. on the web,.... want some quakers with my geeeez....???? hehe vicky, you're a TRIP !! i LOVE it.....!! and to all the rest of you... all i have to say is this... :Pif i don't say i love you, just call me a liar because i have no clue what i'm not talking about ... y'kjow? and if i DO say it, then you better believe it and if you don't, well, i guess that's you're problem, y'know? *wink* and here's to vicky, it's good to meet another sicky sometimes these pomes can be quite tricky can't they? teehee *grin* winksmooch dot com lol |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
you two...*sigh*...what a trip...! enjoyed the laughter..lets do it again! hugs, g no i wont be afraid. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this was a laugh a second. . . LOL. . . great job. . . and doreen?? :P back at you!!! LOL --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This was Toooo Fuuuun !!!!! Thanks Connie |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Vicky...she has that effect on a lot of people!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
doreen- LOL...thanks for stopping in for another visit! ...and, yes, isn't marge just DUCKY!! lol glad you enjoyed this...you're quite a trip yourself ya know..lol dg- roflmao...do i scare you? i don't mean to! lol thanks for stopping by.. Sven- thanks for reading... glad this gave you a laugh! Connie- thanks much! glad you enjoyed!! Balladeer- i'm learning that about her! rofl thanks for reading.. hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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