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vlraynes
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0 posted 2001-06-24 10:20 PM



i'm writing this poem
down here on the floor
'cuz i'm laughing so hard
i can't stand it

there's silliness running
through passions tonight
and it seems our doreen
is the bandit

she's posting...unposting...
and writing in riddle
to mess with our minds
is her mission

her slap-happy antics
have doubled me over
to be able to breathe's
what i'm wishin'

~vlraynes

ROFLMAO @ you doreen!!!
thanks for the laughs!  



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-24-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-06-24 10:21 PM


there aint nuttin better
than an irish setter

The End

doreen peri
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2 posted 2001-06-24 11:00 PM


i made you laugh?
how dare I do it!!
gaffaw? a grin?
how did i do it??

you're KIDDING me!!
i made you chuckle?
well sue me then
with fist and knuckle...

please slam me up
against the wall!!
i made you LAUGH???
I don't recall!!!

how did i do that?
please, pray tell....
i made you LAUGH???
well, what the hell

i hope to make you smile again
if not, oh well, i just can't win
perhaps if i am lucky, then,
i'll laugh myself, and start again

and as the grins come into view,
i'lll laugh at me, if you laugh at you!!!

hehehehehehehehe *wink*
thanks, my friend!!

[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 06-24-2001).]

Severn
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3 posted 2001-06-24 11:02 PM


ROTFLMAO!!!

K

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-06-24 11:04 PM


Vicky AND Doreen~
You both QUACK me up !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

VAS
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5 posted 2001-06-24 11:38 PM


I just LOVE fun!!!  And you gals are bringin' it up, firin' it fine with a comedy line!
vlraynes
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6 posted 2001-06-24 11:47 PM


walt-
   lol...great poetic response!  
   thanks for reading..

doreen, my slap-happy friend-
   laughing at both of us here..lol.
   thanks for the fun response..
   hugs to you..

Severn-
   glad you got a laugh out of this..
   thanks for reading..

Marge-
   sometimes i QUACK myself up! lol
   glad you're laughing with us..

VAS-
   thanks for joining in on our silliness..
   glad you enjoyed..

   hugs to all,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



doreen peri
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7 posted 2001-06-25 12:19 PM


i just wanted to say that marge's reponse was really ducky! at least it's billed that way. on the web,.... want some quakers with my geeeez....????

hehe

vicky, you're a TRIP !! i LOVE it.....!!

and to all the rest of you... all i have to say is this...

:P




if i don't say i love you, just call me a liar because i have no clue what i'm not talking about ... y'kjow? and if i DO say it, then you better believe it and if you don't, well, i guess that's you're problem, y'know? *wink*

and here's to vicky,
it's good to meet another  sicky
sometimes these pomes can be quite tricky

can't they? teehee *grin*

winksmooch
dot com

lol

dgvarner
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8 posted 2001-06-25 06:17 PM


you two...*sigh*...what a trip...!

enjoyed the laughter..lets do it again!


hugs, g

no i wont be afraid.
no i...wont be afraid,
just as long
as you stand,
stand by me...
-ben e king

Sven
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9 posted 2001-06-25 06:41 PM


now this was a laugh a second. . . LOL. . .

great job. . . and doreen??  :P back at you!!!  LOL

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Zinsser
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10 posted 2001-06-25 06:53 PM


This was Toooo Fuuuun !!!!!
Thanks
Connie

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11 posted 2001-06-25 10:36 PM


Vicky...she has that effect on a lot of people!!  


vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
12 posted 2001-06-25 11:24 PM



doreen-
   LOL...thanks for stopping in for
   another visit!   ...and, yes,
   isn't marge just DUCKY!! lol
   glad you enjoyed this...you're
   quite a trip yourself ya know..lol  

dg-
   roflmao...do i scare you?
   i don't mean to! lol  
   thanks for stopping by..

Sven-
   thanks for reading...
   glad this gave you a laugh!  

Connie-
   thanks much!
   glad you enjoyed!!  

Balladeer-
   i'm learning that about her! rofl  
   thanks for reading..

   hugs to all,
   ~vicky

  

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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